Showing posts with label flash fiction. Show all posts
Showing posts with label flash fiction. Show all posts

Thursday, May 7, 2020

*FREE SHORT STORY FOR MY FELLOW COVID SHUT-INS*

Originally published in this now defunct magazine, this is me taking Lovecraft and doing my own thing with it. Feel free to provide your honest opinion even if, especially if it is not positive. How else can I tell you you're an idiot who doesn't get my genius if you don't tell me you hated it?

Hint: It's flash fiction, so it's over before you know it!


From Out the Abyss Within

by
Christopher Nadeau



They were crawling out of his eyes, his ears, his nose.  Long, slender tendrils coated in viscous, dripping fluids, shining in the light as they wiggled free and onto the floor.  From there, they congregated, hissing, writhing, merging into newer, larger versions of their former selves.  And they spoke. They spoke to him.
“No god but us,” they said.
“Please,” he said, lower lip quivering, “Let me go home.”
“You are home,” the creatures said.  “So are we.”
His body went limp, obeying their command/assurance.
Still able to move his eyes, he glanced to his left and saw the portal still shimmering.  One word, the word, and it would close forever.  No more slithering, controlling monsters.
“There will be order,” they said. “No more enslavement to passions, desires, impulses.”
Sweat rained down his face from his hairline, filling his widened eyes with water and salt.  At his feet, the creatures kept merging, growing, becoming.
He needed to move.  Stop them.  Close the portal.  They’re only the beginning. They’ve waited forever and now they’re back!
“Please, God,” he muttered.
 “We came first,” the unified voices said. “We are your god.”
Somewhere out of his range of sight, lay the body of Johnny, his partner-in-crime.  They’d devoured him the moment of their arrival, declaring him unworthy. And who were they to make such a determination?
Evil. Primeval. Ancient Ones. His words from earlier today played over and over in his head: It’ll be so cool. Let’s rock the foundations.
They won’t rock.  They’ll cease to exist.  Reality is made of rubber and it will bend and take on new shapes.
The human race would die in its sleep.
“You are holy,” they said. “You are the Temple.”
Blinking, he glanced once more at the portal.  Close off, he thought. Seal!
“The Path to Salvation begins with you,” they said.
He paused, mouth opening and closing without sound.  Me? He thought. But I’m nothing. No one.
How could anything important involve him?  His father called him the useless one.  The disappointment.  A mistake.
“Me?” he asked.
The creatures stopped and turned to look at him, one mind, many bodies, unmoving.
He smiled.  “Me.”
From deep inside the portal came a chorus of inhuman voices singing of the Coming Change, hailing the Return of the True Gods, marching onward, marching, marching…
And he let them come, into him, through him.  The Temple. Not useless. Holy.
Let the world bend like rubber.
They were back.
There was time enough for him to say, “Hallelujah,” before the Old Ones bridged the gap between the portal and the Temple and his vision was filled with glorious oblivion.




Monday, December 30, 2019

I did it! 3rd & Final Patreon Post for December.

This one isn't publicly viewable but it does contain a free flash fiction story for those interested in pledging.

Click here to read it.

Saturday, November 2, 2019

A Critique of my Own (unpublished) Short Story

Yesterday I wrote what in two sittings used to be known as a "short-short story" that is so dark, so disturbing and such a raw peek into my inner turmoil that I am afraid to let anyone else see it. It's not a revenge fantasy or some type of sociopolitical screed. Its subject matter, couched in surrealism and metaphor, is much more private. And no, I'm not going to reveal it here. What I am going to do, however, is discuss the writing of the story itself.

Clocking in at 866 words, the story I wound up calling "Once Broken" drops the reader directly into the middle of a moment that comes with no explanation. Filled with cryptic dialogue between two men, one of whom may not even be there, it basically details the prelude to a decision with enormous consequences. This was one of those times when what was in my head showed up on the screen.

The prose is sparse, the dialogue drives the plot and the imagery is almost non-existent except when a point is being made. I wish it had happened once the story was written but my damn self-awareness kicked in somewhere in the middle and I realized whose style I was mirroring.

I've been a Don DeLillo admirer for several years, and am especially impressed with his more surreal books such as "Cosmopolis," "The Body Artist" and "Mao II." Something about his shifting realities and grounded characters appeals to me in ways other authors have not tapped into. Perhaps Chuck Palahniuk's work has a similar effect on me but DeLillo's functions on a much higher, more esoteric level.

I'm not saying my story does that but it certainly has aspirations in that direction. Sadly, it's also disturbingly auto-biographical. It may even be the story someone looks back on one day and says, "If only we'd paid closer attention to that one."

Regardless, I now have a story that makes me uncomfortable. I suppose I could make the argument that in my own way I've achieved true art. For what is more meaningful than creating something one cannot feel comfortable letting others see? Is there not a purity to that? 

I remember my mother once telling me she painted something so horrifying, so deeply personal that she destroyed it afterwards because she couldn't bear letting it exist as a reminder of how far she'd fallen in those moments. Well, to borrow a famous commercial phrase from the Eighties, "I've fallen and I can't get up." I experienced no shame when writing "Once Broken." I just don't know if I want to give people clues to my state of mind if it actually gets published.

And that's a big "If." It's not the most accessible piece I've written.

So, while I welcome the feeling of being able to disturb myself, I will have to take some time before deciding if anyone else gets to read it. If it helps out everything into perspective, I think it's one of the best things I've written in a while.

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